HARD TIME OUT 1

A Picture Book Dummy

My former agent sent the dummy for this PB to many publishers. They all rejected it. She (agent) made some excellent copy changes that I can’t seem to find. Sorry. The text might be a little clunky here and there, but I hope you enjoy my efforts more than the editors/editor’s assistants who passed on it.

But out in the dark, he’d be all alone.

He wouldn’t be safe like he was at home.

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So he changed his mind.

And he changed his ways.

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I’m sending this in 2 emails, because Substack tells me the complete book is too long for one. Sorry.

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HARD TIME OUT © Mark Scott Ricketts

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